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by Fnork
Thu Jan 22, 2004 2:12 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*********Chapter 76******** Mustardfoot stood watch with his high-powered gun at the ready. He had it in a sniper configuration, with the extended barrel and long range scope. The weapon?s exceptional range was wasted in the thick wooded areas of Colorado, but in his hands it was every bit as potent...
by Fnork
Wed Jan 21, 2004 7:23 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs: Feedback
Replies: 71
Views: 100298

Here's the (almost) final tally, not counting the Epilogue which we're still working on: 88 Chapters 175 Pages (MS Word, size 12 font, single spaced) 578 KB (.doc file) Just for comparison, the old joint story from the GUN board (now called "High Stakes) was around 65 pages in size 12 font. The...
by Fnork
Wed Jan 21, 2004 7:09 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*******Chapter 75******** Emotionless towards the Suzuka 250cc propped up against it, a Joshua tree soaked in the afternoon sun. A dusty breeze swirled around the dirt bike and Redline Fox. He was standing in the middle of a seldom used dirt road far into the Colorado wilderness. Fresh tire marks in...
by Fnork
Mon Jan 19, 2004 10:34 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*********Chapter 74********** Oozing into cracks in the parking lot?s asphalt, Cole?s blood was being dried by heat as fast as it left his body. The blood seeped between the variations of Colleen?s shoe sole as she looked down at him. Cole wheezed out, ?Don?t...look at me like that.? Restraining her...
by Fnork
Mon Jan 19, 2004 5:44 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*********Chapter 73********* A strong pair of hands shoved Colleen away, and she fell to the ground, scraping her cheek on the hot asphalt. She quickly rolled over and looked back at her assailant. She instinctively reached for her concealed knife, but stopped when she saw what had attacked. Death M...
by Fnork
Sun Jan 18, 2004 6:59 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*********Chapter 72******* Fnork flew in a wide arc to get a good view of where Colleen, Dante, and Mustardfoot were, when he noticed a red light go on in the cockpit. The oil pressure in his port side engine was dropping rapidly. The turret on the German car must have managed to hit his engine duri...
by Fnork
Fri Jan 16, 2004 3:03 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

*********Chapter 71******** Death Machine charged through the smoke as several of the small rockets harmlessly impacted his bumper, but with all smoke and explosions obscuring his vision, he never saw the landmine slide out from under the Quicksilver Catamount. It went off under his left front wheel...
by Fnork
Thu Jan 15, 2004 8:08 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs: Feedback
Replies: 71
Views: 100298

ahh, shit. it's fixed now



btw, remember that thing i mentioned a while back about the sniper and Jade? It's actually written now. :twisted:
by Fnork
Thu Jan 15, 2004 2:39 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

the real chapter 70

********Chapter 70********* Dante swerved as tracer fire from the German car sliced through the air where his windshield had been. ?Well I?ll be damned, Fnork was right. Death Machine lead us right to ?em!? Dante said as his eyes traced the line of fire back to its source. Colleen?s battered Quicksi...
by Fnork
Wed Jan 14, 2004 8:06 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

********Chapter 69********* Oni watched the Morgen-Bernz disappear into the distance, and finally broke his gaze when a moaning sound at his feet caught his attention. He looked down, as the man lying on the ground rolled over and looked up at him. ?Ahh, Agent Cole. What a pleasure it is to see you ...
by Fnork
Tue Jan 13, 2004 2:34 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

************Chapter 68************ Death Machine?s car slowed to a stop with the soft crunch of gravel. The engine was not running, which explained his perfectly silent approach. The door opened, and a large cloaked figure stepped out. His skull for a face shined pure white in the sunlight, and his ...
by Fnork
Mon Jan 12, 2004 4:18 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs: Feedback
Replies: 71
Views: 100298

I'm back now, so regular postings will resume. We're rapidly approaching the end now, so it should be pretty fast-paced from here on out.

enjoy.
by Fnork
Mon Jan 12, 2004 4:02 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

The beginning of the end...

********Chapter 67******** Oni stood next to his Yamato RM3 as a pair of battered German cars rolled to a stop nearby. His highest-ranking assistant stood a step behind, holding a metal briefcase. The Messernacht had one entire side torn up from sideswiping another car at high speed, and it had cons...
by Fnork
Wed Dec 31, 2003 10:41 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs: Feedback
Replies: 71
Views: 100298

Happy New Year!

Bonus time again!

In celebration of the new year, I've posted up the next entire scene again for your enjoyment.



Also note, I will be out of state for most of next week with little to no computer access, so there will be no updates until Jan 12th.
by Fnork
Wed Dec 31, 2003 10:36 pm
Forum: Legends of the Southwest
Topic: Kids N' Vigs
Replies: 65
Views: 85962

New Year's chunk

*******Chapter 61********* Air whistled through the battered front end of the Catamount as Redline Fox aimed the car down an old two-lane concrete road that was overgrown with weeds and had large chunks missing at random intervals. The car?s engine purred softly, even with the damage it had suffered...